I need quick help….Does my sentence sound positive or negative?
Wednesday, March 17th, 2010 at
10:34 am
I’m making a website about giving out live trainings weekly about all marketing strategies…(I’m an affiliate, i would like to make my own website)
1. Please give me other word than “No-Obligation”…another way to say it….
2. Take a free trial & Get Started…
3. This Your Chance! Make it or Lose it the decision is in you hands…..(does this sound positive or negative? If it sound positive, please fix my grammar mistake….If it sounds negative, can you help me to say it in a better way?)
I appreciate your help guys
Nickole
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It s pos but capital letters on Free will make your point stronger also go to google add words for ideas
1. It is your site, visit as you wish!
2. Nothing stops you, just try and get started!
3. You will be immensely benefitted just by your choice!
(I have become your copy-writer!) Best of luck!
You are free to come and go
Just pop in and say ‘Hello’
If you want to try us out
Jump right in, don’t hang about
Chances like this are few and rare
Take the challenge, don’t stand and stare
You need both positive and negative to draw in prospective clients….It needs to look positive if they do it and negative if they don’t!!
What you have sounds good, maybe you could use just a little different wording though:
Example
1. No Commitments, or long-term Obligations!
2. Take a Risk-Free Trial Today and Get Started on the Path to….
3. This Is YOUR Chance! Make more Money NOW or stay satisfied with your current situation…The CHOICE is YOURS!!
These are just some of my thoughts, hope I was of some help
Good LUCK!!
First u need to fix your run-on sentencesor else the reader would have to read it twice (like i did) Then take other people’s advice.